Honest feedback thanks
Posted 16 March 2012 - 07:30 AM
Am I close?
Posted 16 March 2012 - 10:05 AM
I don't care for the background. The car being so close behind her feels odd to me. I wonder why she is standing in front of a mediocre car. If it were a Ferrari I guess that might be different. But clearly the shot is not about the car at all, or else you would have shown more of it. So it just feels like you drove her somewhere, had her step out of the car, grabbed a quick shot, and were done with it.
Also the barbed wire fence in the background is not inspiring to me. Partly because you just can't see enough of it, so it feels accidental. OR it feels like it was trying to hide completely, but couldn't quite get out of the way. If you wanted an industrial feel, then use the barbed wire more to your advantage by showing it off a bit. But if you didn't want to use it, then get an angle where it doesn't show. But there again, if all you have is part of car and a flat sky behind your model, I'd suggest that isn't enough.
Posted 16 March 2012 - 10:24 AM
I think if you lost the car and maybe had a more interesting sky it would have helped.
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Posted 16 March 2012 - 10:39 AM
Posted 17 March 2012 - 06:28 PM
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