Hi!
I went to it (altho providing the link would have made life easier, but its under your profile anyway)
I liked that it loaded quickly.
I think you probably need to change the size/font of the intro text ( I need to do this too and have no clue how) and watch where the sentences land. For instance, don't be afraid to hit enter, and make sure each sentence that is important, starts on its own line. Its easier for people to read and highlights that new info is there. If the sentence starts midway thru one line and goes midway to the next, I skip it a lot of the times, thinking its just BS info I dont' need.
I like your images, you have a nice, colorful, crisp look to your portraits.
The slideshow galleries could use a sentence of insturction for the less computer savvy customers. Some people do not know that the triangle at the bottom will start the slideshow.
Also,when I see slideshows, I always think they need music. If it were just a click and move gallery, it doesn't 'need' it so much, but slideshows, IMO, benefit from music.
I looked briefly at your pricing. You are way better than what your price point is but I am really tired of that discussion, so I will drop it. Make money or dont'. Your choice. Invariably, people have tons of reasons why they are charging so cheaply, be do be aware...you are inexpensive compared to the quality of your work.
Best of luck with it all!!
Barbara