hey mel! welcome to mpix. it's a fabulous forum and you will get lots of advice and make some new friends!
i took a tour of your website and i liked it alot. you have a particular style and a specialty. i love your focus. in contrast, if you go to my website, you see JACK OF ALL TRADES. i'm in the process of fixing that right now.
everything had a nice flow to it and i easily navigated from one section of your site to the next. your images are full of movement and emotion. terrific.
some people will want to see your prices upfront but that's a decision everyone has to make for themselves.
good luck to you!
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