hi there
a couple of things....
nice idea..... but the photo is WAY tooooooo large! no need to be that BIG! send/poster smaller files.
dead center is deadly.. don't put the horizon line in the center of the frame
clean your sensor :-)
expose for the highlights.. the clouds are washing out.
there is no foreground element.... you'd need to be closer
use Shadow/Highlights in Aperture, Lightroom, Photoshop or Elements to tone down the highlights and open up the shadows.
hope this helps!!!!!!
see ricksammon.com > articles page > Canon Digital Learning Center for some scenic/landscape tips
best
rick
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