This is a recent session with my co-worker's daughters.  Please comment on lighting, comp, and anything else that will help me improve.  Hope I did this right in Photobucket.  Thanks.

Hmm..I resized in photobucket and they still look big on screen.

Nevermind...they resized and look smaller now.

 First off, I like how you posted your shots..........it was nice to be able to see them all at one time!!!!

I think that the color looks off on most of them......might want to check that i think it will make a big difference....I really like the last one  color looks ok on that one i think!!!!

Jen

#1 looks like she got pushed into a wall........you shouldve shot differently like the other sistas wall shot........dont care for #2 looks like a mug shot, I like tilting and turning chins every so subtly...............

#3 you shouldve had her sit taller with her back straightened

#4 is okay, a tad too dark, #5 is nice!

#5 is great. Maybe could be a teensy bit sharper, and maybe a wee bit more contrast?? Don't take my word for it though....

Honestly, I don't like the hands on the wall poses.