Heres some from my 1st newborn only 5days old. Let me know what you think feel free to play.

MBills

Beautiful job with the little baby.

Nice capture of the baby sleeping on the arm.  Do you have the first image as a horizontal?  I think a horizontal cropping might enhance that one.

Love the second one, with the baby's arm position, mouth open and the tatooed hand - excellent!

It might be my monitor, but they could all be a tad dark.  Overall, nice session.

Not your fault but I HATE moms falling out ponytail, and crooked nacklace! lol

 Ahhh, sweet baby.  I think with a little PP these could really be good.  Thanks for letting me play (it's not perfect, I know, but it was quick)!

Thanks to all, I have the 1picture both ways. The mom wasn't going to take any picture with her but she loves that one. They are a little darker on here then the prints.

Mark

I don't care for selective color, and the lighting in all of them seems very flat (IMO, not dark)...perhaps some contrast or play a little with curves or exposure comp. If they truly are flat, sometimes you cannot help/fix that in post.

You have many great ideas here, but the angles are a little off/wierd IMO.

Good first go at it!