just want to know how this one looks with this glow added.. how about the crop? thanks

Okay... so please ignore the fact that my kids are kinda messy & need haircuts! They REALLY hate taking pics for me anymore... and getting them clean for them is even harder! :) So thanks for any C&C... Tonia And if anyone knows how to get brown eyes lighter please let me know... both my boys...

This is my first posting AND my first shoot, but it's for a friend of a friend and I wasn't paid or anything. I am just trying to build up some skills & would love any friendly advice! thanks in advance...