This is the first photo shoot I have done (except for family). I'm just a beginner, not a pro so don't go to hard on me . How do these look? Feel free to play! Any advice welcome.

Okay so I find my pictures are a bit on the boring side Yawn!!!!! Somebody tell me how to make them sing? Any advice at all is welcome. Look at each picture and tell me if you please, what could have made it better. Don't bother with being nice either. I want to get better at this and the past few...