These are for a music theatre major... big theme is to keep things looking natural. I'm not overjoyed with them, but anything that will help is welcome!

Okay so I find my pictures are a bit on the boring side Yawn!!!!! Somebody tell me how to make them sing? Any advice at all is welcome. Look at each picture and tell me if you please, what could have made it better. Don't bother with being nice either. I want to get better at this and the past few...

This is my first posting AND my first shoot, but it's for a friend of a friend and I wasn't paid or anything. I am just trying to build up some skills & would love any friendly advice! thanks in advance...