This is the first photo shoot I have done (except for family). I'm just a beginner, not a pro so don't go to hard on me . How do these look? Feel free to play! Any advice welcome.

Hey guys, I tried again. Do these look better? I really like the b&w and the color looks better but it looks a little fake to me. I like a more natural look but I like the smoother skin of the ones that are edited. I think the color pic is too blue but my monitor is not calibrated right, that's...